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A MAze in grace

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Updated: Oct 26, 2024



A Maze In Grace


I’ve failed a lot of people

And a lot of people failed me

Like autumn leaves the summer,

My leaves are falling from the tree


One of these days, I’ll leap, “No diggity!’ I will

Whether up or down, or forward, I’ll leave

Yes, I'll say goodbye to this bleak town

Where happiness is hard to perceive


A maze of hope and fear surround

Glimmering like a test pattern,

Pulling me back to the start


A glimpse of hope hangs by a thread 

Butterflies rise, but the light fades apart


This town was never home,


Not even close 

No way!


Heavy thoughts, like anchors tied

In tomorrow, void wins, and yesterday


Will there be spring once more in my heart?


A silver lining is not fading that fast

A bottleneck Christmas salvation

How long can this feeling last?


A maze of hopes and fears surrounds me

Heavy like a weight, pulling me down under

Then again - “Lo, How a Rose E’er blooming”

Butterflies rise, but the light drifts asunder

 

I’m here and now, self-doing, self-lacking

A system of success and failure tracking


In a universe that’s grown so tired

Hacking away at dreams expired


I know, oh I know, oh yes

I don’t know a single thing


The earth might turn square 

A prism, a pyramid, or a ring


HC_Thiesgen

Oct 24, 2024 

7:27 pm (ET)



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Lia Ulrich
Lia Ulrich
Oct 25, 2024

Ein sehr tiefgründiges Gedicht. Ich habe beim Lesen sehr mitgefühlt und kenne die Gefühle selbst auch, die du durch dein Gedicht ausdrückst. Dein Gedicht hat richtige Bilder in meinem Kopf gemalt. Wirklich sehr gut geschrieben! 💙

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HC Thiesgen
HC Thiesgen
Oct 26, 2024
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Thank you. I love to hear that! Much appreciated! You're the best. 💜

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