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A Maze In Grace
I’ve failed a lot of people
And a lot of people failed me
Like autumn leaves the summer,
My leaves are falling from the tree
One of these days, I’ll leap, “No diggity!’ I will
Whether up or down, or forward, I’ll leave
Yes, I'll say goodbye to this bleak town
Where happiness is hard to perceive
A maze of hope and fear surround
Glimmering like a test pattern,
Pulling me back to the start
A glimpse of hope hangs by a thread
Butterflies rise, but the light fades apart
This town was never home,
Not even close
No way!
Heavy thoughts, like anchors tied
In tomorrow, void wins, and yesterday
Will there be spring once more in my heart?
A silver lining is not fading that fast
A bottleneck Christmas salvation
How long can this feeling last?
A maze of hopes and fears surrounds me
Heavy like a weight, pulling me down under
Then again - “Lo, How a Rose E’er blooming”
Butterflies rise, but the light drifts asunder
I’m here and now, self-doing, self-lacking
A system of success and failure tracking
In a universe that’s grown so tired
Hacking away at dreams expired
I know, oh I know, oh yes
I don’t know a single thing
The earth might turn square
A prism, a pyramid, or a ring
HC_Thiesgen
Oct 24, 2024
7:27 pm (ET)
Ein sehr tiefgründiges Gedicht. Ich habe beim Lesen sehr mitgefühlt und kenne die Gefühle selbst auch, die du durch dein Gedicht ausdrückst. Dein Gedicht hat richtige Bilder in meinem Kopf gemalt. Wirklich sehr gut geschrieben! 💙